Not a big fan of this commercial. It’s bad and I’m tired of watching it. Here are three ways they could have made it better.
Show what people are seeing on the iPad.
The version of the commercial above doesn’t show it, but during the TV version, Bo shows random passerby’s on the street the Subway factory machines that are slicing the meat. The people are horrified! I want to see this shocking footage too. Wouldn’t it be more effective–and memorable–to show the actual machine cutting the block of meat? It’s easier to disbelieve that the footage is shocking when you can’t even see it. Show me.
Show a real person (with a smile) slicing Arby’s meat.
If the WHOLE POINT of the commercial is to show that real people slice your meat fresh, why would you only show their hands slicing it?! Show the real person slicing, making the sandwich, and serving a real person. What a missed opportunity. I can’t make eye-contact with your hands.
Change the focus of this entire commercial.
(Let’s not even mention the fact that a former NYC detective does nothing to inspire my confidence in the standards of the freshness of food.) Whenever you compare to someone else, instead of talking about what you believe in, you miss out. There is always someone else. Don’t be distracted. Tell me what your company stands for.
Sorry Bo Dietl and lonely eagle screech. Not inspired.
